Us…

trapped in my bubble
i hear my own words
my refrains, my cries : i

walk the streets
cocooned in my thoughts
never listen, only hear : me

talk to you
about my own fears
sitting here, never know : you

turned away
from the the world outside
i see, but never notice : them

sit here
live our whole lives
never loving, we have lost : us

~ by slopintheocean on September 30, 2008.

Posted in inside my head
Tags:

5 Responses to “Us…”

  1. Great. :-)

    lostgalaxy said this on September 30, 2008 at 6:59 am

  2. @lostgalaxy: Thanks… :-)

    slopintheocean said this on October 1, 2008 at 6:17 am

  3. Why lose them… can’t we go on looking for them? For us?

    siropdevanille said this on October 1, 2008 at 6:48 am

  4. @siropdevanille: hmm….we could….but only once we realise that we have lost ‘us’….most of the time we go on living without ever realising that we have stopped existing as a whole but just float around like parts…it’s time we realised that and rediscovered ‘us’….

    slopintheocean said this on October 1, 2008 at 12:51 pm

  5. Why aren’t you writing? Write! Write some more :)

    siropdevanille said this on February 4, 2009 at 6:01 am

Leave a Reply